WALT: convince Nicholas that Family is more important than Money.

19/10/2017

WALT: convince Nicholas that Family is more important than Money.

Family is more important than Money.

Dear Nicholas,  i’ve heard that you have created a machine that turns your memories into gold so I am writing this letter to you because I think that family is more important than money.

Firstly, I believe that family is more important than money because family is the single most important influence in a child's life. From their first moments in life, children depend on parents and family to protect them and provide for their needs. Parents and families are also important because they are the first form of a child's first relationship.

Having lots of gold may make you feel secure and live a comfortable lifestyle can unquestionably contribute to your overall sense of well-being, but it can't compare to having a close connection with the people you love the most. If you don't pay enough attention to your family it can lower your quality of life, but if you pay too much attention to  your machine that turns you memories into gold it can really damage your relationship with your family because you lose out on time and connections with them.